Hello everyone! It’s late, almost midnight, and I would like to go to sleep now. Sam has put this first case to bed, and both he and I are hoping you’ll read it and let us know what you think, good, bad, or otherwise.
I am trying to decide if this story is ultimately a trilogy, with each part of this story becoming it’s own, shorter book, or if this will read better as a longer, three-part novel. Let me know your thoughts, please!
In the meantime, please enjoy this very rough draft! I will be editing in the coming days and weeks – things might change! I’ll try to post about the changes as they happen.
I fell behind schedule. After pushing out chapter 2, I thought I’d take a couple of days off to rest up for the climax and denouement of the first arc. And I did. And then I took two more. Oops.
But the last two days have been (too?) productive. I managed to get out more than 17 000 words over those two days, as I finished the draft of Chapter 3. I have just started in on Chapter 4, which promises to be much shorter, so I’m hoping i can get it out in another day or two.
One of the things that I have never heard established writers talk about, or at least very seldom, are the physical demands of writing. Sitting for hours at at time pushing words out of your fingertips is hard work, physically. My body is as tired as my brain right now!
However, Sam and his new associates are not satisfied to let me rest yet. Even after finishing yesterday’s marathon 13 hour writing spree, the characters inhabited my dreams, making sure I was that there was still more to the story, and wouldn’t I feel better if I just got up and finished it?
They’re right. I will.
Nevertheless I took this morning off to look up form my keyboard, do some laundry, and spend a little time on a new puzzle.
But now it’s back to writing. I’ll be posting the final two chapter soon soon soon! And I’m excited to have you all read them!
Given how long this first section has become, I am started to think about presenting this as a trilogy of books, rather than one book in three parts.
This first part is likely to come in around the 55 000 to 700 000 word range. This puts it nicely in the same range as many pulp detective paperbacks of the 20th century – a nice, pocket-sized paperback!
Also, I am now starting to get anxious to start the editing process – to make sure I’ve got the details right, to add some textural elements I rushed through to get the main plot down, and to make sure that the consistency and development I think I’ve written is actually there and not just in my own head.
So, when you read them, let me know what you think…will it stand on its own? Will you still want Books 2 and 3?
Stay posted! Let me know if you’ve read the first two chapters or if you’re waiting for more before starting! If you’re enjoying it, let me know what it is you’re enjoying!
And finally, the picture at the top of this post is of Parker Penguin, my constant writing companion. He always reminds me that I need to be writing more. I have also included a picture of his cousin Pat Penguin, who sits to my left.
Well, it’s a week later than I wanted it to be, but I have now finished the rough (rough!) draft of chapter 2, adding an additional 18k words to the novel so far. Work on Chapter 3 has already started and, again, the goal is to pump it out in a week. It didn’t work out last time, but I am getting in better shape daily for just getting the words out of my head and onto the page.
Thank you to all of you who have been, are, or will be reading this story. It means a lot to me.
Some of you have heard about Sam’s origins from me directly, but many of you have not, so here is a brief backgrounder.
Sam Shovel came into existence during keyboarding (ie typing) class in grade 9. Almost every class we were expected to type without stopping for a period of time. We could bring in text to recopy or we could just make something up – the content didn’t really matter because the point was to be typing.
So, inspired by the Bullet Tracer character in Calvin and Hobbes as well as so much of the hard boiled/film noir detective genre, and playing off of the name of Sam Spade from the Maltese Falcon (a shovel being related to a spade,) I started writing weird little detective short stories with him. He was not, at the time, a serious character in any traditional way. The stories were deliberately mundane and silly, driven by over-dramatics and puns, but sticking to the hard boiled detective conventions – lots of self-aware narration, a sense of grit, larger than life supporting cast, etc.. I had a lot of fun writing Sam.
Over the years I lost the original stories I had written with him, and this still makes me a little sad. I remember them being pretty good! Nonetheless, they were gone and my life took a very different route than grade 9 me could ever have imagined. So, Sam started fading into the back rooms of my awareness over the years, but he was never forgotten. As story ideas inevitably wandered through my brain, Sam was always the first character I turned to, wondering if ti was time to bring him to the foreground of my life again. For years, the answer to that was ‘no.’
But he wasn’t being idle, it turns out. Even if I wasn’t paying a lot of attention to Sam, he was paying attention to me. And in doing so, Sam was slowly and quietly evolving in my unconscious, waiting for his momentous return.
During the turbulent changes that have marked the past 10+ years, Sam has been demanding more and more attention, insisting he has something to say and cases to tackle that are relevant to our times. I was less certain, but he was insistent, so we started talking again.
The news and events of the last decade have challenged our public perception of police and their relationship to communities. I found myself with very mixed feelings about many of the procedural dramas my wife and I enjoy watching. I became more aware of the idyllic and romantic portrayal of police and police departments as essential social heroes. I didn’t like it. But, I was still in love with detective fiction and procedural stories! What to do?
That’s when Sam and I started asking the question: Can you do detective fiction without police? Can it be done without crime? What would that look like?
Some of my favourite detective fiction of the 20th century doesn’t involve cops, or at least doesn’t romanticize them. Travis McGee is a salvage operator living on a houseboat in Florida. Nero Wolf is a New York detective with an open disdain for the skills of the police. Parker, of course, of Donald E. Westlake fame (writing as Richard Stark) is not in any way a good guy. Robert Parker’s Spencer is an ex-cop who operates as much inside the criminal sphere as out. But all of these characters ultimately deal with crimes if not always the police. So, although they all offered me hints and pieces, I still didn’t know how an investigation without a crime would proceed!
Teaching in an inquiry environment (thank you PSII) provided me with the final clue. Everything we do in inquiry teaching and learning is a kind of procedural mystery: there are questions that need detective work to form the answers; things can take wild, unexpected turns; there can be multiple perspectives on the same information; answering the question is always a process.
Sam got very excited, and I couldn’t help but be excited with him. This is it! Sam Shovel, Private Inquirer! Well, maybe not, but the idea was enough. So Sam went from a semi-traditional, hard-boiled detective to an academic drop-out. The world is filled with people who have problems, and they aren’t always criminal but they all need answers.
Pulling his fedora and trench coat out of his bag and putting them back on, Sam declared himself ready to return to the light of day. We got busy planning his new origin and the first of the stories that would allow him to hang his shingle one more. I am now pouring that story out of my head and onto the page as fast as I can, which is still not fast enough for Sam. He is keeping me up nights talking through upcoming scenes, checking on details, prodding me to type for just another ten minutes. He’s really hoping you’ll enjoy his stories.
There is much more to say about Sam, his origins, and his influences, but there is still a lot of book to be written, so that’s enough for now.
Please enjoy this rough draft of the second chapter! As always, comments, questions and observations as welcome and encouraged! And please share with your friends and family!
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Okay, with a bit of luck, I’ll talk to you all again in a week!
