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Hello family and friends!  We have been overdue for a public update on all things Sargent, so I thought I’d stop and write something out.  Some of you will already have some (or all) of this news, but others of you we haven’t had a chance to catch up with yet.

Carol Anne is in the midst of her fourth cycle of chemotherapy.  This cycle is a little bit different for her, as she is no longer starting and finishing the cycle with Vincristine. Her oncologist, after reviewing her progress, identified that she is experiencing more side effects (largely neuropathy?) that benefits from that drug; the literature suggests that the treatment is not significantly less effective without it, so it has been dropped for the remainder of her treatments, much to Carol Anne’s delight.

Additionally, she has now had two MRIs since finishing radiation treatments.  The scans still aren’t pretty, and we do not yet have definitive evidence of tumor regression <sigh> so there is another MRI planned for the near future.  What it has been showing is what the oncologists and surgeon are pretty sure is “pseudo-progression.” Carol Anne’s research suggests that this would be a good sign, as it is evidence that the brain is responding to the treatment the way it is supposed to, so we are holding on to that optimism until we have a reason not to.

Other than that, Carol Anne is continuing to handle the chemo treatments pretty well, fatigue notwithstanding.  However, she is getting bored and she misses people.  Please feel free to come visit!

As spring promises that it will make its presence known, our small pride of cats is getting more and more anxious to be outside!  To this end, we have procured and assembled a kitten coop for the front yard!  It is still very sparse, but we have plans to fill it with various levels and obstacles for them to play on while they watch birds and insects in the garden.  If you have ideas, or if you’d like to contribute some materials, please let me know! The Twins will very much appreciate it.

Speaking of the Twins, they are much larger than they used to be!

(Chai wants you to admire her new haircut)

I am stepping back into the world of paid work!  I have sent out a number of applications to teaching jobs in the past month, and I have also started talking with some folks about various bits of teaching work (some of which I am already doing!) I am very happy to be teaching again, even if it is still just in small amounts. I have missed (almost) everything about it a great deal (not the report card bit, though.  Happy to not be doing that!)

I am also sending my novel around to various readers for feedback!  Yes, I completed a novel at the beginning of the year – just a simple little mystery-style novel.  It is the first of a series of novels that I have planned out.  Over the course of writing and developing it I decided that I wanted this book to be very accessible. By this I mean that I have set out to write and lay out the novel to make it more accessible for readers who have challenges with text that aren’t traditionally recognized or accommodated. Specifically, I am trying to make the book more accessible for ADHD, dyslexic, and autistic readers, as well as readers who have difficulty reading for long periods of time at a sitting. .

To this end, I have employed fonts that are designed to be more easily read by those who have challenges with traditional fonts.  I have also taken the detective-noir convention of the ‘overly-self-aware’ narrator and leaned into it so that questions of intent, sub-text, and meaning are more clear and explicit. And finally, I have used extensive dialogue and frequent paragraph and chapter breaks to make the layout easier, to make it easier to take breaks, and to make it easier to keep track of characters and story points.  

I am hoping to be able to compile the feedback, make any last edits necessary, and send it out to agents and publishers before my birthday this year – a little 50th birthday present to myself.

If you are interested in being an early reader and providing me with feedback, please let me know and I will share a copy of the book (digitally) and a list of questions I’m looking for feedback on!

Finally – Weddings!  There are two weddings in the family coming up quickly. 

My second-born child Nathan and his fiancee Zoe are getting married at the end of May in Ottawa.  Myself, Martin and Zamira, and Kathleen and Matthew will all be there. (The schedule for the week doesn’t work for Carol Anne, who will still be finishing chemo treatments at that point so she’ll spend some time in Toronto with her sister instead.)

And – our niece Sarah and her fiance Ben are also getting married this summer, and we will all be traveling to the interior for that as well!  Lots of travel and family coming up and we are looking forward to all of it.

Phew! Okay, that’s the quick and dirty update! 

 We love you all and we look forward to seeing you soon!

Hello everyone! It’s late, almost midnight, and I would like to go to sleep now. Sam has put this first case to bed, and both he and I are hoping you’ll read it and let us know what you think, good, bad, or otherwise.

I am trying to decide if this story is ultimately a trilogy, with each part of this story becoming it’s own, shorter book, or if this will read better as a longer, three-part novel. Let me know your thoughts, please!

In the meantime, please enjoy this very rough draft! I will be editing in the coming days and weeks – things might change! I’ll try to post about the changes as they happen.

Without further ado:

Sam Shovel and the Question of Choice

Chapter 1…food, drink, shelter, sleep

Chapter 2…essentials, plans, perspectives, hope

Chapter 3…being , belonging, beginning, adjusting

Chapter 4…answers, offers, arrangements, agreements

Thanks for reading!

A cartoon penguin on a window pain look over the edge of a laptop screen that contains some writing

I fell behind schedule. After pushing out chapter 2, I thought I’d take a couple of days off to rest up for the climax and denouement of the first arc. And I did. And then I took two more. Oops.

But the last two days have been (too?) productive. I managed to get out more than 17 000 words over those two days, as I finished the draft of Chapter 3. I have just started in on Chapter 4, which promises to be much shorter, so I’m hoping i can get it out in another day or two.

One of the things that I have never heard established writers talk about, or at least very seldom, are the physical demands of writing. Sitting for hours at at time pushing words out of your fingertips is hard work, physically. My body is as tired as my brain right now!

However, Sam and his new associates are not satisfied to let me rest yet. Even after finishing yesterday’s marathon 13 hour writing spree, the characters inhabited my dreams, making sure I was that there was still more to the story, and wouldn’t I feel better if I just got up and finished it?

They’re right. I will.

Nevertheless I took this morning off to look up form my keyboard, do some laundry, and spend a little time on a new puzzle.

But now it’s back to writing. I’ll be posting the final two chapter soon soon soon! And I’m excited to have you all read them!

Given how long this first section has become, I am started to think about presenting this as a trilogy of books, rather than one book in three parts.

This first part is likely to come in around the 55 000 to 700 000 word range. This puts it nicely in the same range as many pulp detective paperbacks of the 20th century – a nice, pocket-sized paperback!

Also, I am now starting to get anxious to start the editing process – to make sure I’ve got the details right, to add some textural elements I rushed through to get the main plot down, and to make sure that the consistency and development I think I’ve written is actually there and not just in my own head.

So, when you read them, let me know what you think…will it stand on its own? Will you still want Books 2 and 3?

Stay posted! Let me know if you’ve read the first two chapters or if you’re waiting for more before starting! If you’re enjoying it, let me know what it is you’re enjoying!

And finally, the picture at the top of this post is of Parker Penguin, my constant writing companion. He always reminds me that I need to be writing more. I have also included a picture of his cousin Pat Penguin, who sits to my left.

Happy reading, all!

A cartoon penguin with his eyes closed is on a window pane. A garden can be seen through the window

Well, it’s a week later than I wanted it to be, but I have now finished the rough (rough!) draft of chapter 2, adding an additional 18k words to the novel so far. Work on Chapter 3 has already started and, again, the goal is to pump it out in a week. It didn’t work out last time, but I am getting in better shape daily for just getting the words out of my head and onto the page.

Thank you to all of you who have been, are, or will be reading this story. It means a lot to me.

Some of you have heard about Sam’s origins from me directly, but many of you have not, so here is a brief backgrounder.

Sam Shovel came into existence during keyboarding (ie typing) class in grade 9. Almost every class we were expected to type without stopping for a period of time. We could bring in text to recopy or we could just make something up – the content didn’t really matter because the point was to be typing.

So, inspired by the Bullet Tracer character in Calvin and Hobbes as well as so much of the hard boiled/film noir detective genre, and playing off of the name of Sam Spade from the Maltese Falcon (a shovel being related to a spade,) I started writing weird little detective short stories with him. He was not, at the time, a serious character in any traditional way. The stories were deliberately mundane and silly, driven by over-dramatics and puns, but sticking to the hard boiled detective conventions – lots of self-aware narration, a sense of grit, larger than life supporting cast, etc.. I had a lot of fun writing Sam.

Over the years I lost the original stories I had written with him, and this still makes me a little sad. I remember them being pretty good! Nonetheless, they were gone and my life took a very different route than grade 9 me could ever have imagined. So, Sam started fading into the back rooms of my awareness over the years, but he was never forgotten. As story ideas inevitably wandered through my brain, Sam was always the first character I turned to, wondering if ti was time to bring him to the foreground of my life again. For years, the answer to that was ‘no.’

But he wasn’t being idle, it turns out. Even if I wasn’t paying a lot of attention to Sam, he was paying attention to me. And in doing so, Sam was slowly and quietly evolving in my unconscious, waiting for his momentous return.

During the turbulent changes that have marked the past 10+ years, Sam has been demanding more and more attention, insisting he has something to say and cases to tackle that are relevant to our times. I was less certain, but he was insistent, so we started talking again.

The news and events of the last decade have challenged our public perception of police and their relationship to communities. I found myself with very mixed feelings about many of the procedural dramas my wife and I enjoy watching. I became more aware of the idyllic and romantic portrayal of police and police departments as essential social heroes. I didn’t like it. But, I was still in love with detective fiction and procedural stories! What to do?

That’s when Sam and I started asking the question: Can you do detective fiction without police? Can it be done without crime? What would that look like?

Some of my favourite detective fiction of the 20th century doesn’t involve cops, or at least doesn’t romanticize them. Travis McGee is a salvage operator living on a houseboat in Florida. Nero Wolf is a New York detective with an open disdain for the skills of the police. Parker, of course, of Donald E. Westlake fame (writing as Richard Stark) is not in any way a good guy. Robert Parker’s Spencer is an ex-cop who operates as much inside the criminal sphere as out. But all of these characters ultimately deal with crimes if not always the police. So, although they all offered me hints and pieces, I still didn’t know how an investigation without a crime would proceed!

Teaching in an inquiry environment (thank you PSII) provided me with the final clue. Everything we do in inquiry teaching and learning is a kind of procedural mystery: there are questions that need detective work to form the answers; things can take wild, unexpected turns; there can be multiple perspectives on the same information; answering the question is always a process.

Sam got very excited, and I couldn’t help but be excited with him. This is it! Sam Shovel, Private Inquirer! Well, maybe not, but the idea was enough. So Sam went from a semi-traditional, hard-boiled detective to an academic drop-out. The world is filled with people who have problems, and they aren’t always criminal but they all need answers.

Pulling his fedora and trench coat out of his bag and putting them back on, Sam declared himself ready to return to the light of day. We got busy planning his new origin and the first of the stories that would allow him to hang his shingle one more. I am now pouring that story out of my head and onto the page as fast as I can, which is still not fast enough for Sam. He is keeping me up nights talking through upcoming scenes, checking on details, prodding me to type for just another ten minutes. He’s really hoping you’ll enjoy his stories.

There is much more to say about Sam, his origins, and his influences, but there is still a lot of book to be written, so that’s enough for now.

Please enjoy this rough draft of the second chapter! As always, comments, questions and observations as welcome and encouraged! And please share with your friends and family!

A final note: I am preparing to leave the Metaverse (Instagram and Facebook) by the new year. All my personal content will be coming down and I will be using it as minimally as possible. I have recently started using Mastadon (@sarge75@mastadon.social) and Bluesky (@sarge75.bsky.social) so there will be a lot of repeated posts as I sort out their workflow. Hello to all my new followers from those sites! Please subscribe for direct notification of updates.

Okay, with a bit of luck, I’ll talk to you all again in a week!